Comments : Three Wishes

  • 18 years ago

    by Jennifer Fox or Jackson

    Good poem...5/5,,,l8rs, jen

  • 18 years ago

    by Areyoucrazy

    Loved the poem . I like how you say even though you have 3 you only need one cuz a girl is all you want ,hope you find that , and if you already got that , keep it

    nice write hun
    April~

  • 18 years ago

    by Lenny

    Hey long time no comment I guess. Wow you have become quite the popular one. Well I like this poem, its not your usual style and Im not sure its a s good. It could be a bit simplistic, some lines are a bit cliched and some dont keep to the patterned. Not my favourite of ur pieces and I think you could do better tho rhyming is quite difficult.

  • 18 years ago

    by Crystal

    Wow matthew.... this poem was beautiful.... i really liked reading it....
    5/5....
    take it easy sweetie....

    crystal....

  • 18 years ago

    by dora

    Hey that was really g0od. a t0uching p0em beautifully written. and i liked the structure keep up the great w0rk. h0pe u had a w0nderful xmas!!

  • 18 years ago

    by KrypticKristen

    I loved this poem it's really sweet, cute, and amazing liek all of ur others 5/5 keep up the good work xox

  • 18 years ago

    by Heidi

    Again, your writing is amazing.. It's beautiful, the way that you said you would only have one wish and that'd be enough. Adorabal! Keep up the good work.. 5/5 for sure ;D

  • 18 years ago

    by wanted dead or alive!

    ..and i wish you'd find that girl! she'd be very lucky to have someone who would treat her so right and think such lovely thoughts as you do.
    you have a beautiful insight on life, with beautiful words and a beautiful soul
    keep writing! i love your work
    x x x

  • 18 years ago

    by wanted dead or alive!

    *realy do love this poem, its so touching

  • 18 years ago

    by .....Luba.....

    Lovely, sweet, touching simply amaizing
    i feel so much better when i read you poems ;)

  • 17 years ago

    by adele

    Hi matthew
    i know you here this all the time but your poetry really moves me. it always puts a smile on my face.your poetry really cheers me up and makes me feel like there are some guys who really care and maybe one day. i will find one for myself. please keep writing.

    adele

  • 16 years ago

    by Megan

    Hello. I feel like I'm just repeating what everyone has said about all of your poems, but this one made me feel like I had to say it anyways. Each and every poem is amazing. A few brought tears to my eyes, and they all moved me. They really make you think. Thanks for letting us girls know that there really are guys like you out there, we just need to be patient. When you find that girl, if you haven't already, hold on to her, because you never know what could happen. And like everyone else said, your poems brighten my day, I feel a lot better after I read a few. I just wanted to say thanks for giving people hope.

  • 15 years ago

    by Aubrey

    Absolitely perfect.

  • 15 years ago

    by Aubrey

    I meant absolutely. :)