Comments : Who are you?

  • 11 years ago

    by PS

    I love the end. the beginning just sounds like prose... but then it develops into something. its got a rhythm and a good point. i dont really like the grocery cart deally. good job. it doesn't click for me until the end.

  • 11 years ago

    by Beth

    I like this poem. It explains that what you do is not who you are.

  • 11 years ago

    by GreyWolf

    Excellent poem. =) 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by CrysluvsBowie

    Excellent! i truly loved it. And i have barracaded my heart...but i like your work keep it up!

  • 11 years ago

    by Neil

    Very Interesting poem really Unique Different in Idea and composition i like it thank you for sharing it
    take care always
    ~Neil~!

  • 11 years ago

    by Victoria

    Amazing poem keep up the awesome work.

  • 11 years ago

    by Damion xxx

    I love it hun=) ur a really tallented poet
    5/5 keep eriting and i'll keep reading =)
    Damionxxx

  • Really good, reminds me of my own story

  • 11 years ago

    by Mafia Cilla

    Hmm...... Okay.

  • 11 years ago

    by Jason

    Very good poem, the emotion sucks me into it haha. But yea I liked it a lot

  • 11 years ago

    by Roxy

    Wow so much emotion its so cool
    i love this poem
    5/5
    amazing i swear this is the best poem ive read today lol
    xoxroxyxox

  • 11 years ago

    by Mairuny

    I think this poem is o.k. 2 tell da truth!! But its kinda good... well c/b

  • 11 years ago

    by Cyma Khan

    Well said!!!
    keep writting

  • 11 years ago

    by Nikki

    I like it!!! umm no i dont have a boyfriend....one or 2 of them r about my best friend stephen...

  • 11 years ago

    by Marsha Robertson

    That is a great poem keep up the good work.. it sounds like a rap

  • 11 years ago

    by Jessica

    I thought that this was interesting, it had a good topic and i like the question that you are asking.. the rhymes worked well and the descriptions were good.

    you untill your black and blue.
    ^ here, it should be "you're" not "your"

    good job! 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by brkendown

    You really know how to go and pull the words out of other people and make them your own! sorry i think that came out wrong! 5/5 again!

  • 11 years ago

    by Nelle

    I really loved the last couple of sentences...i have asked someone that question once beofre and they said all the other things like you explained here..but that wasn't the question..so i understand what your saying! great job

  • 11 years ago

    by Emma

    This poem speaks to me...I dont know..I feel like that...i dont know what i would say...great poem..it makes you think...
    Emma 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    I liked the poem, the thoughts were different, it wouldnt be something i'd write but it was really good. the questions were phrased well and it was very good
    xxxxx