I love the end. the beginning just sounds like prose... but then it develops into something. its got a rhythm and a good point. i dont really like the grocery cart deally. good job. it doesn't click for me until the end.
I really loved the last couple of sentences...i have asked someone that question once beofre and they said all the other things like you explained here..but that wasn't the question..so i understand what your saying! great job