Great write. Not only a wonderful poem but a strong message too. So often it is easy for us to hide bhind a job or an image but you blast through this and ask us to face up to the ultimate question.
Definately gives food for thought.

Wow. I love how it seems like you are asking us, the readers. Great. But you know, I don't even think I can answer your question in this poem. To tell you the truth, I don't know who I am...And I wish I did.

Great poem. It really made me think.

>black&&blue

Good job, again. Although some lines were quite long, they it was very well written and makes the reader feel how you felt (if you did feel when you were writing this poem). Excellent job. Keep it up! =) xoxo

Samantha

Good question, you got me thinkin...

Again, your poems are purely fantastic, I enjoy reading them quiet abit. Keep up the wonderful work.

The general message is alright. Something expressed well but the flow just didn't seem right.
and let the world turn your soul into it's own personal grocery cart.
This line just felt a bit too long. The rhymes were alright sometimes feeling forced and other's not. Keep writing.

Very nice poem... a lot of life to it and emotion. Great job... I loved the topic.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

AnnMarie --
I had to give this poem a 3/5, sorry. The flow and the rhyming just messed me up so much, it took three attempts just to read through the whole thing. I would definitely consider revising this ;; some of your lines are too long, and some are too short. Sometimes, you rhymed words with exactly the same word. Sometime, there was no rhyme at all. Long lines definitely pull away from the rhyming, because a poet`s mind automatically cuts where the end of the line should be. So, put a little work into this, and it`ll be much better.

Love Much,
Samantha Hollywood

Great poem... i really liked it... the question ending leaves you guessing... very well written...
Driver

Though prvoking poem which flowed well

Wow. another brilliant poem! this one really appealed to me.. i liked how you asked questions and it is just so true.. wonderful poem! definetely a 5/5

A very thought provoking poem... It's deep and interesting and it flows well. I like the way it seems to be talking to me, and it's made me question what the answer is and who I really am... 5/5
Take care,
- Polly

This poem had a strong message behind it but the words did not match that strenght. The flow was a bit off but i liked the ending, it brought the poem to life:) Great write!

Ohhh. I like this one aswell. Great job yet again. I thought it was a little diffrent in the writtening style, but that's just me. It was really good though. *Thumbs up*

Wow this one is really good. It sounds like you don't want to be lied to and thats very cool :) 5/5

This is a really original poem , made me think. good job got m as the reader involved in the poem, great writting xxALLYxx

Interesting poem. It works well not being held back a particular format.
Have you barracaded your heart,
and let the world turn your soul into it's own personal grocery cart

^ Loved that!

This poem is so original, i've never seen another like it. =)

again, excellent poem. i've read a couple of yours, and there all fantastic. really nice way of writing. 5/5

keep writing,
xxx

This poem makes an excellent point

Rele well written .. the concept is rele good .. ur a very good writer .. keep it on .