Whats wrong with me?

by Fallengod667   Dec 4, 2005


Why do i feel,
the things i do,
all this hate,
when I'm with you.

I know its me,
its not your fault,
but still its there,
tearing me apart.

I don't feel sad,
I'm not depressed,
Theres anger in me,
That will not rest.

Your always there,
you want to play,
I'M SICK OF THIS!
Just go away.

Cus I'm not here,
to play your games,
in the end
Ill just cause pain.

I want to stop,
Why can't you see,
That i don't know,
Whats wrong with me.

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  • 17 years ago

    by melly xx

    "Ill just cause pain."
    that line is very strong and just leaves a mark...excellent job very well written and definetly deserves my 5/5
    good job!!

  • 18 years ago

    by xXxDarkDreamerxXx

    Nice poem I know how it is sometimes... any ways i gave it a 5/5
    ^_^

  • 18 years ago

    by Nyx

    I know how it is

  • 18 years ago

    by kd

    That is one brilliant poem, and has just what i feel like right now!

  • 18 years ago

    by Naerwen

    A question i have asked inside many a time and indeed we are never given a direct answer, questioning the reader is a nice touch to the poem, i enjoyed reading well done.

    Naerwen The Chosen Bride of White Rabbit

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