Good job, this poem had good emotion in it.

I loved it. 5/5 keep up the good work.
**lisa**

That is so sweet and beautifully expressed. I love how you express the need to be with her and the sorrow of departing from her presence. Such love and raw emotion... well done.

---Sher

Excellent job, great flow

Awe... this was so cute and sad at the same time... i really liked how you expressed your feelings in this.. it was very well written! keep up the good work!!

sammie

Gr8 work...interesting use of words....keep up the gr8 work..5/5

~*Who Cares?*~

Amazing job. I like how you miss her even though you are with her. Don't worry that made completely good sence because that's how i feel. I like also how you want to be with her all the time but you can't at night and you feel so depressed by that. I think everyone who has someone that loves them wants to be with them 24/7 but they just can't so they try to make it threw. I really liked this poem. You did an amazing job. keep it up. keep on writing. love always and forever.

Ps: thank you so much for your comments mean alot to me.

Nice job, good flow, liked the last stanza the best.

I like this poem...your feelings were portrayed subtley, yet powerfully. I enjoyed the part "I miss you when with you"....that makes perfect sense to me. Good job.

Lucy Loves Not

Its so sweet, and dont think that you are not maculane when you cry, everybody has feelings and expresses them differently and everyone crys! Great work though and keep it up!

Juls

I really like this poem. I feel the same way just from a womens perspective. Well written. You write with your heart.. I like that. Great job

I'm glad I read this poem, it was full of emotion and worked really well.

keep writing
Nici

I get really excited when I read someone's work who has real talent. And that you have my dear. Keep writing, you're really good at it!