Your poem's really sad...makes me want to cry. I wish there was a way to easy off the pain of a broken heart, but time's the only way...Really touching poem. Thank you so much for your comment and my reason for leaving...well, lets just say a silly boy. Take care and always keep it up my friend.

Bill ,
It breaks my heart and brings me to tears knowing you feel this way ...
I only wish I could help ease your pain or find words that would comfort your heart but I know all the words in the world can not mend a broken heart .
I am a friend , I am here for you ...I know that is not much of a help or comfort .

~Take care dear friend ~

Awesome poem that one!
truly heartfelt, and i just hope that you'll be ok.
Eventually, even if u dont deem it possible now, things will get better..
take care of urself xoox

Omg..ur poem is soo good ur so talented..well done! Xoxo sTephy..

It hurts me my Bill to know your heart is shattered but with time it will mend....Things happen for a reason, we never understand them but we have to learn to accept them and carry on....You'll be O.K.

Love ya, Ann

Bill^^^^^^^typing error, It hurts me Bill I was going to put my friend but I left it out....sorry....

Oh baby, can I give you a hug . . . how about ten of them . . . twenty? Heartache is one of the worst poisons of this world slowing killing away those whow have felt it's pain. Even as life goes on, it kills and as far as I know there is little to do to fix that. Just keep expressing your feelings, don't lock them up inside your head or the will kill you, seriously. I know I tried to die twice because my boyfriend left me without saying goodbye (he's in my school,) and now he was a new girl friend that he is hugging had holding hands with and crap right in front of me. I was so maddly in love with him it was crazy, and he just dropped me. I was a cutter (trying so hard to quit) and so I am sure you can imagine my reaction. It wasn't right and I don't recommend it, but I have a problem with dealing with emotions like that or so I am told and yeah it killed me, almost literally. I don't want pity of your's but I want you to know that closing your heart is the last thing you should do. I know your defenses tell you to do that, but you will never heal without learning how to feel again. You pain will not go away, you won't end up being okay. I made that mistake. You need the support and love of others, this is not something you can do on your own, and people wouldn't want you to either, I know I don't. Hun you can talk to me whenever you like, and I will be praying for you. Just hold on babe, hold on.

-Mikochan

Omg, This poem is just great!! Keep it up. your a great poem

Wow.. thats excellent.. jus remember... ull find someone to love and who will love you in return.. pls check out some of my poems.. ney ney

Great poem. My favorite stanza was the final one. 5/5

-Taylor

Wow! this is truly sad. I don't know what else to say. one of my fav. quote "tis better to have loved and lost then to never have loved at all" I still don't know what that means...or if all the heartache is worth it. god bless and take care

Great poem. 5/5

='( This poem is so good .. ace poem dude =)

Tht poems rly gd.

well done x

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I voted to and this is really some great work even somewhat better then most of mine but please keep it up god bless 1

I like the imagery at the end ^_^

Wow, very powerful insparation made me cry. Hope you can find the healing light again :).

Oh this is so sad! Beautifully written, but so so sad!

Awesome poem, so deep I love it.