Now I'm chilly. This poem kinda scares me...But it's good.

Haha thats why its under the topic dark poems :)

That was deep. My favorite lines were;

Passing through the hidden walls
challenging unyielding laws

There was something special about that.

Deep creepy and dark. brilliant.

Dark...really dark but i like it alot. like i said you are an amazing writer and I hope you go far with ur work someday

Juls

Wow so short yet so powerful i loved this poem very good 5/5

I like the fact that this piece doesn't go on for ever, but instead gets to the point quickly and describes it well.

Keep writing
Nici

I loved this poem. It's short but gets the point across very well.