Never Be Replaced

by Shadawn   Dec 7, 2005


I told u that I loved u
And u can admit that I did
We were the closest couple ever
We even named our 2 future kids

When u left me a while ago
I had shed many tears
I think about u all the time
I can\'t even concentrate on my cheers

U kno that we belong 2gether
And ur friends 2
My friends think the same
So, what r we going 2 do?

I think about u alot
All day and all night
We were like husband and wife
Our relationship was that tight

U will alwayz be n my heart
And I will alwayz picture ur face
It doesn\'t matter who I\'m with
Beacause u will \"never be replaced\"

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  • 16 years ago

    by Brandy

    Nice poem...enjoyed ur choice of words and how it all flowed together...loved it...

  • 16 years ago

    by apey

    I can relate to that and i like it good poem

  • 17 years ago

    by HalfMoon

    5/5

    I like your use of the poems name in the last sentence, it helps make the poem relevent. The ryhming and stanza's are all constant and flowing, and your use of words are simple yet effective [to me it sounds like it was the first time this person expeirienced love, I'm not sure if that was meant or an accident ^^;]

    Nice poem, this is the first I've read currently [the title grabbed my attention when I was looking through your profile] but I'm looking to read more.

    Thankyou for your comments ^^

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