I really love this poem....how long have you been a member?

Keep it up!

*ash*

Quite gripping and inspireing, I like the first two lines a lot, but in the rest of the poem you have some lines I wish I would have writtin.

Well done,
~* TasH *~

The spaceing was a littel off ithink, but the poem was great! it reminds me of a poem i wrote called invisible... but a great use of vocab. well done

Ruby