Confused

by crystaljean88   Dec 8, 2005


I think of you and i get confused
I don't know if you was really my friend or if i was being used

After we first met we was inseparable on the phone
At one point i had you to my very own

Then you met my friends and everything came to an end
But no matter what, to you a helping hand i will always lend

Being confused isn't the best feeling of all
Now your number I'm not allowed to call

I miss you so much in each and every way
"I wish you will call me and say you love me" every night i pray

One minute your my friend and the next your not
Thats why I'm confused, in your trap i was caught

You threw out the bait and i took the bite
Now every time we talk we are sure to fight

I'm so confused on what to do
Was our friendship ever true?

DEDICATED TO: BILLY TANNER
WITH FRIENDSHIP LOVE

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  • 16 years ago

    by SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA

    Another great poem of yours. Although it's a sad friendship poem, it's really good. There is a couple of grammatical errors, but it's really good. Great job! 5/5

    <mOnStRiTo'S pRiNcEsS>

  • 16 years ago

    by Monica AKA Mika

    I like this poem a lot i mean i cant say that i can relate but your flow was pretty good and i love these lines>>>I'm so confused on what to do
    Was our friendship ever true?
    Dont put that pen down girl...

  • 16 years ago

    by luv Shelbz luv

    To me it seemed a little forced on the rhyming. It is a good poem that people can relate to. !!! good job love. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Spirit

    So sad
    you have a nack for poetry and your poem is really beautiful. i wish that i could give you some advise to meke it better but i'd only runin (sp?) it .
    5/5
    Keep up the good work

  • 16 years ago

    by Anaisthitos

    Great emotion, I could relate to this one so I really liked it. Rhyme wasn't bad, word choice was good, however the flow was a little rough. You could work on this to make it better, and it could become and excellent poem.

    Good work!
    4/5

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