Let You Go

by crystaljean88   Dec 8, 2005


My love for you is strong
I know this feeling cant be wrong

We broke up and you said this is the last time
I feel so hurt i can end my life on the drop of a dime

You tell me that i need to end my feelings for you
But that cant be done because these feelings i know are true

All the other guys before you were stupid crushes but you are the first real thing
Whenever the song "goin crazy" comes on i think of you and sing

You no longer want me and that hurts me so
But to make you happy i have to let you go

there is only one person in this world that mean everything to me and thats you
I want to make you happy so i will do whatever you tell me to do

The feelings i have for you will never go away
But for you to come back to me every night i pray

I will let you go now so you can move on with your life
But don't be surprised if i take my life out with a knife

When we broke up you also broke my heart
i always wanted to be with you from the very start

But like i said before.. to make you happy i will give you what you want and let you go
But if you ever want me again i will be here.. just to let you know

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  • 16 years ago

    by SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA

    Sad, yet very beautiful poem. The poem is emotional and it almost made me tear up. Great poem! 5/5

    <mOnStRiTo'S pRiNcEsS>

  • 16 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    "You no longer want me and that hurts me so
    But to make you happy i have to let you go"

    ^^I loved those lines..so beautiful, powerful, moving and bittersweet and rolled into one.

    "But if you ever want me again i will be here.. just to let you know"

    ^^What a beautiful ending..filled with such melancholy and bitterness, but at the same time filled with hope of a possible future...a beautiful ending, very intense.

    I loved this, I found it to be beautifully written.
    The only thing that threw me off a little was the difference in the length of some lines, but apart from that, this was perfect.

  • 16 years ago

    by Jenna

    Very emotional, but very lovely. i can relate so much to this...5/5 hun from me. keep it up.

  • 16 years ago

    by Monica AKA Mika

    You no longer want me and that hurts me so
    But to make you happy i have to let you go
    ^^^^i love this line i can really feel your emotion in this poem i love it even tho its sad...but yea keep it up..

  • 16 years ago

    by luv Shelbz luv

    I would like to see longer stanzas, but it is good. A very emotional poem. Just lovely hun. 5/5

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