Great poem this is one of my favs keep up the work. 5.0

Its a nice poem thanks for commenting on mine.

I like this poem, you obviously have been hurt by someone you love very much. Great work tho 5/5

I know what your going through ,i have been there myself ,but life does go on and is worth living ,and you do move on ,ok so you never love that way again ,but you will love again.A very beautifuly written poem ,keep writing you have got talent.

Beautiful!!!thats a great poem!!!!!i can really feel the emotions!!!!!!
-lisa;)

This is very true too. You can tell that you are speaking from a broken heart.

Love can be painful but theres good parts to so dont worry u have to deal with the good and bad u can get through both of them.

This is probably the best poem I've read by you. Excellent job. I could feel the emotions behind it were strong and true, the subject was definately something you felt deeply for, and you can see the hurt in it, and the heartbreak. I hope everything is okay for you. Great rhyme, and wording, the flow is a bit rough, but all in all, it's an outstanding poem! =)

5/5

I would like to see longer stanzas, but it is good. A very emotional poem. Just lovely hun. 5/5

You no longer want me and that hurts me so
But to make you happy i have to let you go
^^^^i love this line i can really feel your emotion in this poem i love it even tho its sad...but yea keep it up..

Very emotional, but very lovely. i can relate so much to this...5/5 hun from me. keep it up.

"You no longer want me and that hurts me so
But to make you happy i have to let you go"

^^I loved those lines..so beautiful, powerful, moving and bittersweet and rolled into one.

"But if you ever want me again i will be here.. just to let you know"

^^What a beautiful ending..filled with such melancholy and bitterness, but at the same time filled with hope of a possible future...a beautiful ending, very intense.

I loved this, I found it to be beautifully written.
The only thing that threw me off a little was the difference in the length of some lines, but apart from that, this was perfect.

Sad, yet very beautiful poem. The poem is emotional and it almost made me tear up. Great poem! 5/5

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