Omg, hun. This is such a great poem... you definitely have alot of talent, so keep up the good writing, okay? =) Top marks from me!

I wish i could say those words to someone because when they tell me they dont care it really hurts and breaks my heart but i have to face reality and just pray that one day they will wake up and actually speak those words to me that they really do care and they are sorry like i said before keep writing i like reading them.

Great poem you have so much talent keep it upp.. and thanks for commenting on mine:)