Im really feelin this poem keep up the good wotk god bless1

I really like this...its beautifully written...with lots of pain and emotion.
you can check out some of my sutff some time if you would like too. 5/5 here of course

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love,Trisha

I think this is my fav. gurl keep up the hard work.. 5.0!

Now i really really like thiz 1..ur talented!!!

Very good, used a very unique ryhme scheme that i really enjoyed. it was very powerful and i could sense the emotion that was put into it, keep it up!

Very good ,but I get the feeling your about to give up ,don't give up life is worth living specially when your mum ,your little one needs you.I live for my kids and wouldn't have it any other way.

Nice rhyming!!!!you have such a great talent!!
kepp it up!!!!!
-lisa 8)

This poem was great. Ive been there before. Seriously keep up the good work. It was really good :). 5/5

I like this poem 5/5!!! keep up the good work!!

5/5 great love it alot of feeling was put in this poem.

Nicely written hun, very sad...i can relate...keep up the great work, you surely have i great talent w/ writting.

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