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by Ali Dec 9, 2005
Love, romance /
I saw her standing in the middle of the way,
She touched my heart & my life changed that day,
She looked at me and gave me a smile,
My head turned over its heels in a while,
Her eyes were like diamonds shining bright,
Her hair so dark glowing in the night,
In a moment I realized I was done,
Is this love? Oh it's so much fun,
We held each other hand in hand,
Her hands were soft, softer than the sand,
I looked deeply, so deeply in her eyes,
The look was endless just as the skies,
I held her close & thought is she the one,
She kissed my lips & my heart was won,
I just couldn't believe if it was true,
Is this really happening between me & you,
My heart was pounding fast deep inside,
But there was a sense of love & pride,
I asked her passionately, will you be my wife,
She replied with love, throughout your life.
Its so nice aNd swEet!!!~ 5/5 kEep up the gOod wOrk~~ ^^
by PURE HEART
Beautiiful! is that a realy story??? :0)
really loved it.....
Sweet poem......i liked the way u described the girl.....very cute !!!
by Princess Love
That is a very sweet poem Ali. You have alot of talent, keep it up.
by Gesselle Valle
Really beautiful and great poem. You're a great poet Ali! ^_^ Thank you so much for your comment on mine, it almost made me cry....(happy tears). Take care and thanks for sharing.