The reality of this poem..sort of draws you in. Best way to say it is this poem is your own..you wrote it..yet people can also feel like it's theirs, but it isnt. I'm half asleep and make no sense, sorry. 5/5 though. Take care.

This is terrific...I love it . I can tell you put a lot of thought and emotiion into it . Keep up the good work ....xoxo 5/5

U might not be used to it but u shure do it good!

Wonderful. I went down to New Orleans with my mother to rescue animals, and I saw how heavy a hit Katrina was, and I wanted to write something to show my emotions, but I couldn't, and you did great, I love it. The details are horrifying, but you presented them amazingly. Great job, this is a compelling peice and I know you don't write these kinds of poems often, but maybe think about it.

This was fantastic

I really like this one. yes, it's so sad knowing that one thing in this world can distory a hole bunch of people and it's really nasty knowing the fact that once you turn a corner is a dead body there, i mean what if it was someone you know it's really horrifing knowing that. You brought this up to everyone in here and i'm glad keep it up. keep on writing. very talented woman. love always and forever.

Are u from New Oleans because if not i dont think u should write about it but good poem