Sinking Ship

by Syn   Dec 10, 2005


Sinking ship,
Tattered wings,
Broken heart,
Or so it seems.

I hit an iceberg,
With silent screams.
Don't know if ill make it,
With these broken dreams.

I hate this life,
With tattered wings.
I hate this life,
If agony it brings.

So much written deceit,
On an empty page.
I feel so broken hearted,
I pray its just a stage.

She is the iceberg of my life.
Lord, let me put her under my feet.
I can't stand this coldness,
What I truly need is heat.

-Syn

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  • 11 years ago

    by M MEM

    Oh wow, this is really amazing, great analogy and flow. i love it. its a shame the rating only goes to 5.

  • 11 years ago

    by Ike Dizzle

    Good job. I love the symbolism you used in the poem. 5/5
    -Vino

  • 11 years ago

    by DamselInDistress

    I like it....Why do you cap every single word? lol just wondering.

  • 11 years ago

    by DamselInDistress

    I like it....Why do you cap every single word? lol just wondering.

  • Hey I loved it, good job!! Keep it up :)