Looking Down

by Juls   Dec 10, 2005


She looks down
40 stories below
The river rushing
so fast it sounds like
a fieous gun
She stands on the edge
puts her hair back in a bun
She tells herself
its better than shooting a gun
As she takes the step
to her death
her life flashes before her
For once in her life
She feels weightless and free
But it doesnt last long
She hits the river
with such force
Now she has left everyone that she thought she hurt

* I know its not my best but I was bored and I was watching a movie so I wrote it.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Awsome, I loved it. I could really picture it. Keep up the good work.

    Love ya,
    ~Joe~

  • 18 years ago

    by Letty

    I like it . I can really picture it..good job..keep up the good work..