This is really very good. not my favourite, but still remarkable just the same. i agree with george when i say that all your poems are so passionate and heartfelt.

i really love the way you word situations, like:
"The sky blushes, as you taste my lips."

"Stolen hours fall into a new day."

it somehow provokes stronger imajes into my mind than if you were to put it in simpler words, or my direct language. it's amazing on all accounts, really.

one last thing before i get too caught up, i'd really love to know how you come up wiht ideas like the sky blushing etc. what is your inspiration?

with love, Suzie

Hey suzie
thank you so much for your kind words of encouragment. I have always found myself no matter how I try writing about very dark matters, its my fav subject. But I wanted this one to be loving and slightly romantic in style. All my poems are slightly ambigious meaning I write about one thing to mean something else. I love to include into my work the environment i.e in an old poem of Dark Angel ; the eve the evening air tickles at my throat. My inspiration for this poem was in a movie I watched, it was a cartoon for my 3yr old son, the sky winked at the person down below and went red, he blushed. So it gave me an idea to incoroprate this into my work. when my loved one tasted my lips it had embarrested the sky. It was meant to be romantic.
I do hope that answers your question..

Kisses
Hayley

Hello George,

I have to be honest and say that in terms of our my poems real then no they are not...They are a fanstasy me. But are they from my heart, always. I always write from my heart its the only way I write!!

Bye for now

Sorry slight mistake there. What I meant to say was:

I have to be honest and sayy that in terms of whether my poems are real...No they are not.

This very sensual love poem with the passion progressing to the galaxy You are a star I LOVE IT

Great poem i loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!

Hayley
I'm speechless....Once again a breathtaking piece. The flow and the desire within this one I love...Beautiful...

Love Ann

Hayley you have done it again, perked my interest into the back parts of your mind, someday I might manage to figure out all your hidden meanings, and then completely understand your thoughts, I think I have a few of them now, but it takes all the time in the world to truely understand someone else, especially the opposite sex, you are truely a poet, with no need to delve any farther into the other elaborate words one can bestow upon you. as always Harry

Very sensual and smooth. There seems to be peace and acceptance of a situation in this poem. probably just a poem though right?

my favourite lines: tossing the moon and stars your way

stolen hours fall into a new day

and all this you do in a language that is not your own, very impressive indeed.

Thank you Jay for your sweet words, yes its just a POEM!!!

5/5....touched my heart

Just want to say nice job

Nice job!

Thats awesome, im not good at comments.
But I liked the style of this one, its different to your others in so many ways. I agree with wat everyone else has said.

Darkest Wishes,
Matt

Lovely poem .