Comments : Under this tree

  • 18 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Aww, I loved it. this is an awsome poem. I'm sure alot of people can relate to it.

    Love ya,
    ~Joe~

  • 18 years ago

    by APoeticLetdown

    Again you seem to just have these thought on your mind, I suggest you sit down and just write and see what comes out, maybe you'll see whats driving you to write these.
    I liked this one a lot, it reminds me a little of that poem from.. that book, I can't think of it now, but it's about a wolf crying to the moon. Anyway, I like it, it really sets a picture in the readers mind and I can see the whole scene and it's beautiful. Great job.

  • 18 years ago

    by Letty

    Great poem . You really put some thought into it, even though it wasn't about you . I only see one mistake, a mistake that we all make, and that is you missing the p from up . It dosen't matter, I was actually complimenting you . Because I know I miss a lot of letters when I'm typing too . So you just keep up the good work .

    You're biggest fan

    Letty

  • 18 years ago

    by Neil

    Hmm i dont wna get lonely either i like it julie keep it up

  • 18 years ago

    by Ria

    It was beautiful. Especially the contrast between the lonely and the couple who are going to be together forever.Since you say this is not what happened to you,I can guess you are in the poem,in the form of the wolf?:)