This poem is just wonderfull, I usally have a very low image of poem with the same repeating line, but this poem is beyond appropriate, I love your use of words, my favorite line was
[I wish you were my suicide
Taking my life
I wish that I was the blood
Staining your knife]

Leep writting becasue these poems are wonderfull.

This is a really cute poem.. it flowed well.. rhymed really well to.. Great word choice also.. 5/5 oh and it had lots of emotion in it..