Comments : Narcissistic You

  • 18 years ago

    by unprotected lover

    Nice poem is it true

  • 18 years ago

    by Toni

    Absolutely brilliant, and you still write so well, if not even better =] im thinking of you lady, feels like we havent had a proper chat in a long time, altho im sure its jus bin like 4 days! im waffling now =] you are a true star, hope youp believe me on that one, cos you should

  • 18 years ago

    by master of shadow

    Great poem, vrey well written.

    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Kristi White

    Ur poetry is amazing

  • 18 years ago

    by **Just Her**

    Your an AMAZING writer...

  • 18 years ago

    by kkly

    Pretty good vocabulary....
    Wow...lol..!,,,5/5..

    Keep up ur good work lady Laura.
    alex

  • 18 years ago

    by PAUL HEWSON

    BLOODY HELL .. 5 TIMES I,VE READ YOUR POEM THIS MORNING . ITS F**KING GR8 !! 5!

  • 18 years ago

    by Madga

    Oh, that was quite lovely. Love the use of words, and the way they were put. Honestly, one of the better poems I've read, but I have not read any of your other poems, so I'm only comparing this to others on the site. I enjoyed reading it, well done.

  • 18 years ago

    by RainbowDemon RogueDoll

    Teehee! loves it... that was really good. kept mi captivated tha whole way thru. keep writing!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Nelle

    It was a truly great and amuzing poem laura...your not like anyone i have ever met...you are really different...but it's not soo much as a bad thing...you are a excellent writer...you can express yourself perfectly...i loved your poem very much!!!! xoxo nelle

  • 18 years ago

    by limp

    I THOUGHT I'D ALREADY COMMENTED THIS. :o
    I F U C K I N G LOOOOOVE THIS. Yeah.
    Suck my big toe.x

  • 17 years ago

    by limp

    Wow dat erecktun gurl rly has styl.