Why I Cry

by Samantha   Dec 14, 2005


So deep and sweet
Is the sound of your voice,
I fell in love with you
I didn't have a choice.
We walked together
The two of us a perfect pair,
But then we broke apart
And you were never there.
You told me that you loved me
I knew that you were lying,
But I couldn't let you go
So we continued trying.
Even though things got better
It still felt very wrong,
Then I started wondering
If in your heart I'd ever belong.
Although in the end
It was I who said goodbye,
At night when I go to bed
Your the reason why I cry.

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  • 18 years ago

    by NannO

    Hey.. this is reli gud too.. i lyk the way u progressed thru the whole poem.. agen, ur rhyme was gr8.. keep it up
    i just have one suggestion.. i think u shud change ur last line from "Your the reason why i cry" to "You're the reason I cry" or "You're why I cry" if u wanna keep teh relationship between the line and the title.. coz "reason" is alredy "why".. does that make sense??? look out 4 the misspellings.. like "your" to "you're" coz they sound different in text (ok, i now they dont, but wen i read, homophones mean different..lyk wen u wrote your the first thing it thot was your as its meaning, soo..)
    well, i guess thats it
    ill be comin bak 4 more of ur poems asap.. ( i got tests evryday this week)
    take care
    NannO

  • 18 years ago

    by rar

    This is really a good poem

  • 18 years ago

    by amelia

    Thhis is just awesome... sorry for delay in replying
    ur poem's great
    5/5
    love
    amy

  • 18 years ago

    by Katy

    Wow that was awesome. gave me chills cuz i know exactly how it feels.

  • 18 years ago

    by BrokenMemoriex

    The rhyming is excellent! Love your poems.. By the way, you're on my favourites list =)

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