Layers like and onion

by ღtheღcrunkღpirateღ   Dec 15, 2005

like an onion
many layers
as each layer is shed
tears fall
til you've reached the core
and theres nothing left to unravel

as you can tell I'm not to shit hot on finding appropriate titles, this was written at 3 in the morning so its not to great either =)


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  • 11 years ago

    by SammiBABY

    It's true! honesty again, good work. you write about different themes,
    sammi morris

  • 11 years ago

    by Jason Meres

    Love the metaphor, simple and piercing. Drawn directly to the point with the simple format. I like it.

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