That was a powerful poem
"Watching the liquid pain"
that line i thought was really creative and i liked it

I loved it

I loved this poem

I loved this poem

Omg im actually stunned!! that poem was amazing, i could really relate. the words and descriptions were so powerful! i read it like 3 times! wow, ur an amazing writer! thanku so much for the comments, im usually a v.dedicated on the site, but havin difficulty getin on the site wen im home! and thanku 4 spotting the spelling mistake!
take care huni, and keep on writing!
lots of luv,
xxEmmaxx

It's real baby. It's true and real and Gosh Dang it (sorry I don't swear, lol) it really sucks. I still wish I could hug you and hold you through the night when you want to hurt yourself so badly. How can I show you that I want to be with you so you don't feel so alone? It's so stupid cuz I don't live anywhere near you and all I can do is talk to you, but that's not enough this time. I wish I could help you quit, and yet you know you are cared about and loved because just by the little I know about you, you have already shown me that you have so much good to offer this world, so much good and I wish I could show you the you I see. Baby if you need me, you know where I am. 5/5 on the poem though.

Always,
Tainted Mikochan

Hey babii! i luv dis poem, **hugs so tight** y0o will always be my best friend, i luv y0o s0 much g0rguz, n y0o n0 im always here 4 y0o, im living 4 y0o and if u werent here i would be dead, y0o can trust me babe 2 tell me things coz i no i can 4 y0o! i luv y0o

This hit a little to close to the truth-

It's all pointless,
I'm too far gone.
How to go on,
When you're all alone?

Lv A, x

Hey thanks so much for commenting on my poems it really does mean alot and feels good to no that you no how i feel...wow that was so amazing keep it up....JoSiE.....

Love the phrases and the choice of words. your poems are always and forever beautiful. maybe i should write a poem about my user name too... anyways, ;D 5/5 and i thank you from the bottom of my heart for commenting on my poems.

This is sooooo good. But don't cut. The superhero anti pain will come to you soon. Great poem.

This poem amazed me. u write so well.
good job dear......
take care
bharti

Wow! this is soo powerful, i love your poems keep writing xx

I'm in that situation too, that was really powerfully expressed, I'm speechless, 5/5 and couldn't be anything else!
luv Helen xxx

My old comment:

This is sooooo good. But don't cut. The superhero anti pain will come to you soon. Great poem.

Hey
i rlly like ur poem. its rlly good! i like it i can get into it!

Tough one..i liked it so much. keep it up Gal.
much luv
NemO x0xx00x0x0x0x

Nice usage of words, v cool indeed...