Comments : Portrait of The Mind

  • 12 years ago

    by Jacklyn

    Another great write! you seem to have the poem writen so simple but the emotions it just grabs the reader no matter what. i've read it about four times and it still has the same strong effect on me once i finish it. great job!

    ~Jacklyn

  • 12 years ago

    by Bill Turner

    Beautifully written. Great job!

  • 12 years ago

    by Chelsey

    JJ!! OMG! This poem is amazing! I loved every line, how you put it together and the title was just wow!!! No suggestions here please leave it the way it is! Your an excellent writer!!
    ~Chels~

  • 12 years ago

    by Scaleeski

    Excellent!

    Short and sweet, The way I like them
    Haha,Keep writing!

  • 12 years ago

    by Shelby Bridges

    JJ,

    I don't know what kind suggestions you
    are for...You wrote it well.....

    Shelby

  • 12 years ago

    by Gesselle Valle

    Great poem 5/5 ^_^ keep it up.

  • 12 years ago

    by Lu

    JJ ,
    No suggestions needed on this write ...
    I think it is just flawlessly perfect as it is ...
    Perfection !!!!!

  • 12 years ago

    by Gesselle Valle

    JJ,
    Thank you for your sweet comment on my poem...I truly appreciated your support.

  • 12 years ago

    by lisa marie

    Great job. I found it to be the normal low self esteem a lot of girls get, when they are actually something beautiful. And the title was appealing.

  • 12 years ago

    by HOLLY ARMER

    I like the intriguing way you wrote this. It's a very deep piece that leaves alot to perception.
    I also admire the ending, very wise! Keep it up~Holly

  • 12 years ago

    by Dory

    Heyy I'm dory. I love your poems. God family friends sports and poentry are my life too. I like all your hobbies also. Great job. im only 13...and my poems pretty much stink. But please check em out :-)

  • 12 years ago

    by N.M.Sanden

    I'm not a big fan of Sad poetry, but this one was very well written.

    Good job!

  • 12 years ago

    by Steven Beesley

    JJ,

    I'm sorry that I can't really critique on a write that I already find flawless and perfect in flow. Well done!

    Warmest regards,

    Steve

  • 12 years ago

    by shobhana kumar

    There's a very different symmetry to your poetry. one that makes me come back, read them again!
    good luck and keep writing

    shobhana