Another great write! you seem to have the poem writen so simple but the emotions it just grabs the reader no matter what. i've read it about four times and it still has the same strong effect on me once i finish it. great job!
Heyy I'm dory. I love your poems. God family friends sports and poentry are my life too. I like all your hobbies also. Great job. im only 13...and my poems pretty much stink. But please check em out :-)