Comments : Bandage

  • 18 years ago

    by AntiSocial16

    I really liked this one. the idea of someone knowing and loving you unconditionally is always something sweet and to treasure. i hope this is written from the heart and is true from you. you totally deserve it! one thing i would change though:
    "You seem to understand me,
    Though I do not speak a word.
    You treat me like a princess,
    Though it's something that i don't deserve."
    in the last line there, get rid of the "that". it sort of threw off the flow and flow of the poem. otherwise, it was great!
    please stay, safe, strong, and healthy!
    AntiSocial16

  • 18 years ago

    by RainbowSlider

    Nice that you can feel love, too.

  • 18 years ago

    by Marilyn

    Lovely, dearest....