Kia Ora

by † Usher Stiegler †   Dec 20, 2005


All I have to say is goodbye,
It is now my time to die.

Lying in a pool of blood on the floor,
I dont want to go on anymore.

I have left all my mates,
Im now standing at heavens gates.

Please dont cry for I am in a better place,
Heavens full of every race.

Please dont worry for one day you will see my face again.

Kia Ora..

He maha nga tau e mau ana to raua whakahoanga.

Kia Ora means "Goodbye.."
He maha nga tau e mau ana to raua whakahoanga means "Our friendship will remain forever"

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  • 18 years ago

    by Ariana

    I think you should use 'ka kite' instead of'kiaora' as most people use it for greeting. I liked how you were able to show your emotions effectively without sounding exaggerated, its a fine line between the two. Your writing is also very controlled here, comes off nicely. Kia kaha e hoa :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Megg

    I love you're poem its realy personal, and can aply to almost anyone

  • 18 years ago

    by .+*Jess*+.

    All ur poems r so strong of meaning i loved made my eyes tear... thanks for all ur comments and keep it up (the poems, the comments if u want lol)

  • 18 years ago

    by Reem O

    Wooow , you made my eyes teary cuz u reminded me of some , such a great poem from a great poet , keep up the great work n ill keep on cheaking ur poems 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Black~Rose

    Aww good job on this one!! Thanx for commenting on my poems. I've been through a lot just like you. I can relate to your work. 5/5 Keep writing!

    Forever Wilting,
    Black~Rose!

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