Comments : Fell Too Deep

  • Mami... i knew one day u gonna end up feeling like this...but wow this poem is amazing...but i hate to see you hurt...i wrote two new poems...hope u like them

  • 18 years ago

    by dora

    0hh what a t0uching piece. very well written. g0od j0b expressoin urself. i h0pe u have a merry christmas and a safe healthy happy new year!! =)

  • 18 years ago

    by Ladida

    Amazing! If only life were as easy as the the words we right huh? I think you know what the right choice is and I think that you will eventually make it. I know you're strong enough because through your poetry I can tell you've already been through so much. Just give yourself time to do this. Don't rush it or it will be even harder, but I have to say that I don't believe you when you say you don't know how to let him go because you just wrote about how to do it so beautifully. I know it's harder in real life, but I have faith that you will make the right decision for yourself in time. And what better time than the new year? Good luck sweetie!

  • 18 years ago

    by .DrEaM*cOmE*tRuE.

    Another greatttt poem!!... i know how you feel.. ive been through itt too.. u dont know how to tell then how u feel because no words seem good enough, and your scared that if u say to much, that he'll never talk to you again because he doesnt want to be held down, theres better ones out there, even if u dont think there is... u'll find him one day.. u deserve itt!!
    much luv

  • 18 years ago

    by Br0kEnMem0riEs

    I FeEl yOu mAmi...

  • 18 years ago

    by cLumsy

    I'm so sorry you have to feel this way. actually, i'm going through the same thing as you are. except that this guy of mine doesn't want to be friends anymore. and it hurts me the most. stick with what you have and be happy with it. it breaks my heart to see that you feel this way, so try to cheer up, because we all suffer through this perilous plot called, "life". and i thank you from the bottom of my heart for commenting on my poems. it means a lot to me. i hope you have a great new years! ;D 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by cLumsy

    I'm so sorry you have to feel this way. actually, i'm going through the same thing as you are. except that this guy of mine doesn't want to be friends anymore. and it hurts me the most. stick with what you have and be happy with it. it breaks my heart to see that you feel this way, so try to cheer up, because we all suffer through this perilous plot called, "life". and i thank you from the bottom of my heart for commenting on my poems. it means a lot to me. i hope you have a great new years! ;D 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by AmBiE

    I can relate to how you feel but i know your doin the right thing mami..this poem really speaks tho..if u need someone 2 talk to..im hea

    mucho amor..

  • 18 years ago

    by Heidi

    This may sound dumb coming from someone as young as me... but if you love him, you shouldn't hold back. You never know, maybe he secretly loves you too. Don't give up, it may become something more than you expected...

  • 18 years ago

    by mariaa

    Wow gurl u very good and another great poem bro all im tellin u is try n let go yea i kno its hard pero its da best.... n wen its dun its dun u get me ????!!!!!!!! bueno meli i g2g
    much luv
    maria

    by the way all ur poems touch me so much its not even funnie ..........

  • 15 years ago

    by ashley

    I knw 3xactly h0w u f33l..i f3lt lyk3 dat b4 i had 2 l3t him g0 i dnt wnt 2 but my lif3 is s0 much b3tta n0w..i l0v3 all ur p03ms