In the balance of life and death...

by pseudo   Dec 21, 2005


I'm putting back the pieces
Of this messed up life of mine
But this puzzle is impossible
And it's my life on the line

The pain, I've tried everything
Just to make it go away
But it doesn't make it better
Because this pain is here to stay

Behind this face shows
A girl with hidden resent,
But she puts up this big show
Her real self she can't present...

The scars they run deep
I can't seem to hide it
It's like they all see thru me
One thing they won't admit

People thinks I'm a fake
That I pretend to be sad
I don't want their sympathy
But it's not like they feel bad

I'm just a girl in a crazy world
And I'm just trying to make it
But right now I'm stumbling
I think it's time to quit...

It feels like I'm running in circles
Nothing is ever gonna change
Thats the part thats killing me
But even my life has it range.

It feels like I'm watching a movie
Of this life of mine
I see myself in pain
But everyone else is fine

They look right past me
Like I'm not even there
I guess I shouldn't say that
It's not like they care.

I can't go on like this forever
With this feeling of hurt and regret
There is a chance it will get better
But there are some things I won't forget

Unsure if I should pull the plug
While I am standing here
Looking at my own reflection
I see my own death is near

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  • 17 years ago

    by amelia

    Another brilliant poem
    nicely written deep
    5/5
    love
    amy

  • 17 years ago

    by Kristie

    Again...another great poem!! keeping writing gurl you have great talent!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Fallen~Tears

    Oh My gosh this part is so true!! I COMPLETLEY know how you feel!!

    "People thinks I'm a fake
    That I pretend to be sad
    I don't want their sympathy
    But it's not like they feel bad"

    5/5

    ~!*FallenTears~!*
    ~!*Meaghen~!*

  • 18 years ago

    by ShadowedPhoenix

    This was a truely amazing poem, very moving and captivating, you are extremely talented for 13,Wow i'm so impressed!
    Keep on writing!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Juls

    Wonderful work, this poem says alot and i can relate so much and probleby others can too. All your work has outstanding flow and depth in them. I know in life you will go far so dont pull the plug on me now, than ur poetry will never speak wonderful wisdom that it does now. Excellent work

    Juls