Comments : A Stranger Of Desire

  • 18 years ago

    by HJ

    Hey guys, I hope you enjoy my new poem...The title say's it all "A Stranger of Desire" Wanting someone so much without even knowing their name! Im sure we have all been there! hehe.

    Many kisses
    Hayley

  • 18 years ago

    by Jay27

    Well I can see this poem causing a right fuss amongst the male readers, let the frenzy begin!

    Seriously though, very intriguing poem, well written (of course) and very enjoyable.

    I'm not even going to ask if it's real or not, obviously its 100% real and 100% about me. The name you seek is Jay, welcome to the rest of my life.

    Haha just kidding Hayley, but it's good to see you posting again on a regular basis.

  • 18 years ago

    by JAY Poet

    WOW I LOVED IT IT WAS GREAT~!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Jay27

    I might be away for a few days Hayley, so just wanted to wish you happy holidays. Hope you and your family have a great time together.

  • 18 years ago

    by Grotesque Angel

    That was great, I agree with ADEL it was totally awesome.
    If you could do me a tremendous favor and comment on all my work, I know it's alot to ask but I would really love your opinion. I promise I will comment on more of yours.

    Thanking you in advance,
    Matt

  • 18 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    This poem makes me feel strange mesmorized as usual I love your style

  • 18 years ago

    by HJ

    You are too funny!! and very sweet!!!