Cool poem, i am not as good at this commenting milarkey, but it is awesome, lots of the old imagery and stuff... see i really suck, excellent work 5/5 x

Wow your poem is amazing your writing is just wow all i can say is wow srry

Life and death
the eternal struggle
to do good to do wrong
life's sweet pleasures of pain and accomplishment

amazing imagry
filling up with what she can't fight against
the weakness that people just love to poke at

i get the feeling this is more then a poem about a sad girl fighting the world adn wanting suicide as her drug

great job

Good job 5/5 ....

Good poem I loved it at first I didn't understand it but it made me think and i really like that about your work good job keep writing it's more of a gift than a talent 5/5

Kay i'm bored & i wanna put down all the thingers you said that were cute ;]]]]:

i am the best person in the world says:
dang i wanna record you making me giggle

i am the best person in the world says:
but the timing is so hard

i am the best person in the world says:
if we ever meet, promise me for the first 10 minutes thats the only word we say to one another

i am the best person in the world says:
not exactly sure....but you are just a ball of cute, so I knew it would be something adorable

i am the best person in the world says:
because if you do.......I could just eat you up you precious little thing you

i am the best person in the world says:
just enough to give you a pouty lip, because that's adorable

i am the best person in the world says:
because we both look forward to the make-up sex

i am the best person in the world says:
good, thats what i love about you

i am the best person in the world says:
just kidding, you know i love you

HARHARRRRRR (L) x 313489 or sumfan. :]x

LOL. AS IF YOU WERE JEFF 2. you were obviously jeffreyface :]x

This is my fav poem out of all Jeffrey

Gurl from Library

Catherine Stephens

Woah. Jeffness! Nice poem. B-e-a-yewtiful write.
P.s- How many more point do i have befor I have a billion?
5/5
XxXYour#1FanXxX
*shows everyone my t-shirt*

WRITE A NEW POEM

demanded by your many fans ;]

Heh. Jefferrrs, even though I already wrote you a comment.. I decided to write another one.. Because I am Oh-So-Cool. Plus i'm your #1 fan =]. Anywho I love the poem.

P.S-I have a new commercial. Heh.

XxROARxX

Mmore detiual here and a great rhyming..also excellent poetic meter...awesommme.

Lissa

All these people want her free
she just wants to stop the clock
no one knew she had the key
to her very own personal lock

^^ Holy. that is good. Me like. But the rest is BLAHHHH. =l
Overall Rating: 4.5/5