There seems to be like a few different messages that you are trying to send out in this pome and I find it a little confusing.

Little confusing agreed. but it was so vivid.. i love reading your writing cuz it really does make me think

Your writing is always so beautiful and well put together. it always flows and is filled with such passion. this is no different. i loved it! though parts were a little confusing, it was a wonderfully written piece! please keep writing, i love reading everything you post! and please stay safe, strong and healthy!
a fan forever,
*AntiSocial16*
ps: i wanted to thank you for the comment you left on my "shadows" poem. you are a very talented writer, and i really value the input you gave me. thank you so much!

WOW, Amazing, it took my breath away. Excellent poem, and what a great choice of words and the grammar is WOW, I had to use a dictionary, but that's ok because it helps me improve my own grammar. 5/5 loved it, I HOPE YOU'RE NO LONGER MAD. LOL

G.S.

Sumhow u hv a wai of knockin persons valuez in yr poemz w/out tryin. rly iz gud.