Comments : I know we've had our ups and downs ..

  • 18 years ago

    by ♥CRIMSONxX♥

    Hey..this poems really really sweet :)

    Its really great!! Keep it up

  • 18 years ago

    by master of shadow

    Great poem. really well written

  • 18 years ago

    by ASPHYXIATED

    I had a ''friend'' like her hun, and I have seen hgow much she hurt you.
    You are a great person, will a great talent as we see here. This poem was excellent and I loved it just as much as I love you or Pie :P

    Your flow was niice and you were showing her how much you apreciate her for showing you what a real friend isn't this poem would perfect with my ex best friend!

    I've seen how hurt you were, she was not trust worthy.

    I love you more than pie or music.

    SasaxD

  • 17 years ago

    by sarah

    I love this poem, I like the wording you have used and the poem flows perfectly, keep writing and take care Sarah x

  • 17 years ago

    by never

    Great thinking