Reflection

by Puerto_Rican_Chick   Dec 23, 2005


Death defieing shadows...
caught me so soon...
i looked in the mirror...
and saw my doom...

shocked by what i saw...
not surprised i wouldnt be missed...
poisoned by the devils...
life sucking toxic kiss...

right then my heart stoped...
and i felt shadows depths...
creeping in the mirror...
saying, \"its time for your death.\"...

in the mirror i saw myself...
with a look of sadness upon my face...
tearz running down...
not a safe place i could stay...

i didnt know what to do...
my mind rambling with thoughts...
i knew if i ran sooner or later...
i\'d be caught...

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  • 18 years ago

    by Samantha

    This poem now has to be one of my favorites! i love how you wrote this and you choice of words was fantastic! keep it up!

    sammie

  • 18 years ago

    by pseudo

    Wow.. great job on this one!=)

    shocked by what i saw...
    not surprised i wouldnt be missed...
    poisoned the devils...
    life sucking toxic kiss...

    that was my fave part =) loved it your poem had a deeper meaning than its sapposed to have.. umm not sure if that made sense what im trying to say is theres more to the story but the way you ended leaves us hanging which is great kinda of a mystery lol great write keep it up =)

    --emotionless19

  • 18 years ago

    by cowgirlstar26

    I can relate. awsome poem! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Russell

    I like the poem.Very well written.You got some talent and i hope it gets you far.
    much love,

    -Russell-

  • 18 years ago

    by Samantha

    I like your poetry but the odd punctuation is kind of annoying. It takes my attention away from your words and I lose concentration. Therefore, it makes me want to read the poem less and less the further I read.

    But otherwise, your poem has substance and a good flow.

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