Aww..this is so sweet. forever is a long time but when love comes into your life it will go by so fast. I hope you and whoever this is for are happy together. Great work

Julie

This poem is great, but your right nothing last forever. But hey who knows there is a first time for everything, so maybe it will. I truly hope it does especially if he promised you forveer. But still though be on your guard, i really hope you don't get hurt. Great poem.5/5

lots of love
*~*Becky*~*

Thats a very sweet poem! Keep up the good work!

Hey, really good poem, i speically loved this 2 lines
"You say you'll love me forever
But how do I know thats not a lie?"
i can really relate to this poem
keep writin
laters
maria

Amazing job. i loved this one. I loved in the fact at the end that you wrote you PROMISED me FOREVER even though they do break things like that meaning promises but its for the best you know and hopefully you'll both be together FOREVER. but this poem was also true nothing lasts forever. keep it up. keep on writing. your very talented.
OOOOh and thanks for the comments mean alot to me.

I can't believe that this one was rated a 4. It was so good. I really liked it. *5/5*

Love never ends, people change nice work

This poem is good. but it's kind of short, and it ended very quick, it was kind of suprising. But I don't understand one thing about it, some times the lines are couplets, but sometimes they are just by themselves, is this a mistake? or did you mean to do that.

Anyways, this is a good poem no matter what. keep up the good work and always strive to do better.

This poem, it kind of scares me about your relationship. In a healthy relationship, you wouldn't be worrying about these things. Be careful that you don't become too worrysome, you'll kill your relationship. This poem was mediocre, work on rhyme scheme and flow.

Ah...love.....I like this one too

I really like this poem!
It's true too! I really like it!
If you can plz come and check some of my poems! Thanks!
~Cindy~

Nothing is forever.... but not everyone is the same.. 5/5