Comments : WhAt If???

  • 18 years ago

    by master of shadow

    This is a very good poem, its well written and very expressive

  • 18 years ago

    by Rican Chemistry

    Ok the poem is awesome...but nena u confusin me one minute you sad and the next you ok, i dunno...lolz But I love you lots and the poem was really good. I really liked it alot.

    I especially like:

    what if i never went to your school
    what if i moved away
    what if instead of going the whole 10 yards
    i only met you halfway

    You are really good at this stuff so from me u get a 5. Hey and I kno u love Miguel, but what happened did u tell him or what? Hope you had a good xmas...I sure did!!!

    LOVE YOU

    ::MELI::