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by Gesselle Valle
Awww, Bill that was a beautiful and touching poem...the last few lines were very sweet. I'm sure that some day you will fin the answer to your questions. Great poem, always take care.
by Simon Hayes
Wonderful Bill... You've captured a beaufitul scene in words and placed so much love in your poem. Great work :)
by Ann Stareyes
A beautiful and sweet poem. You brought this one to the core of ones soul....Beautiful....Always keep that hope....Merry Christmas
I new from the beginning when it mentioned rain that your beautiful words would bring no vain! a definite 5 check out some of my stuff later!
Damn I miss the sea. Miss the surf, miss surfing. They say a picture is worth a thousand words...well some of your words equate to a thousand pictures in my mind. And a few smells too. haha.
I can just imagine this scene,... beautiful job!
Amazing job! you used great details! all your poems are great! xoxo~Catalina
by Sherry Lynn
That is so sweet, Bill. Hopefully someday the future will bring a wedding ring for you. Great Job bae, and I am so glad that you are finding peace on your journey. Looking forward to hearing from you again soon.
I know what it's like to see sunset on waves, but to know that it's not the same as seeing it with her inches away.
Excellent poem Bill, I really enjoyed it.
For some reason though the last line doesn't quite feel right, maybe it's too short. At it's current length the line feels a bit abrupt and forced. Like you just wanted to end it.
But a small criticism of what remains an excellent poem. Well done.