Comments : Ocean of Life

  • 11 years ago

    by Gesselle Valle

    Awww, Bill that was a beautiful and touching poem...the last few lines were very sweet. I'm sure that some day you will fin the answer to your questions. Great poem, always take care.

  • 11 years ago

    by Simon Hayes

    Wonderful Bill... You've captured a beaufitul scene in words and placed so much love in your poem. Great work :)

  • 11 years ago

    by Ann Stareyes

    Bill
    A beautiful and sweet poem. You brought this one to the core of ones soul....Beautiful....Always keep that hope....Merry Christmas

    Love Ann

  • 11 years ago

    by xx*VICTORIA*xx

    I new from the beginning when it mentioned rain that your beautiful words would bring no vain! a definite 5 check out some of my stuff later!

  • 11 years ago

    by Jay27

    Damn I miss the sea. Miss the surf, miss surfing. They say a picture is worth a thousand words...well some of your words equate to a thousand pictures in my mind. And a few smells too. haha.

    well done.

  • 11 years ago

    by JJ

    I can just imagine this scene,... beautiful job!

  • 11 years ago

    by PrincessCatalina

    Amazing job! you used great details! all your poems are great! xoxo~Catalina

  • 11 years ago

    by Sherry Lynn

    That is so sweet, Bill. Hopefully someday the future will bring a wedding ring for you. Great Job bae, and I am so glad that you are finding peace on your journey.

    Looking forward to hearing from you again soon.

    ---Sher

  • 11 years ago

    by Jay27

    I know what it's like to see sunset on waves, but to know that it's not the same as seeing it with her inches away.

    Excellent poem Bill, I really enjoyed it.

    For some reason though the last line doesn't quite feel right, maybe it's too short. At it's current length the line feels a bit abrupt and forced. Like you just wanted to end it.

    But a small criticism of what remains an excellent poem. Well done.