Comments : Beauty lies within

  • 18 years ago

    by SplitSided

    I like this one thanks for the comment appreciate it. I don't really know you but it's chill..keep your head up..hit me back...peace

  • 18 years ago

    by Anna

    Wow, you hit the nail on the head! Your poem really impressed me!

  • 18 years ago

    by Anna

    Oh, and please can you do me a favour and rate or comment my poems. That would be great

  • 18 years ago

    by ~lost*and*lonely~

    Wow i liked this poem and very true and thanks for the comment on mine love bunches

  • 18 years ago

    by PrincessCatalina

    Wow great job!! keep up the amazing work!! xoxo~Catalina
    ps~can u check out some of my work thanx

  • 18 years ago

    by xDryTearsx

    This poem is amazing it reaches out to people and every person can read this poem and feel better because everyone has insecurities
    so good job. ♥DryTears

  • 18 years ago

    by Once an Angel

    WOW baby this poem is really great! I really really liked it. It give a message that many people need to hear or at least be reminded of. Thank you for this poem, I know I needed it. Ummm also you said in your profile how you were still at the stage were no one read your poems. The only advice I can give you is to comment on other's poems like crazy cuz then they come in graditude to read your poems and they will come back to read more because your's are great! Good luck baby! I know I intend to read more of your poems, they are really good.

    -Tainted Mikochan

  • 18 years ago

    by Dean Russell-Rands

    Awww so nice: i know exactly how that feels in fact u cpuld base that poem around me almost only mine hasnt quite finished: bit more complicated story. nice poem tho =)

  • 18 years ago

    by Void

    Hey! it's about time someone wrote about something like that! I'm glad the message got out and I hope one day all of us will be a little less shallow. Good write and great message! 5/5. Keep it up! :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Samantha

    WOW! simply amazing! this was just written so well and just the way it flows gives it a 5 right off the bat! it rhymed beautifuly and was well thought out and almost perfect! you have me extremly impressed! keep it up! i'll be reading more!

    sammie

  • 18 years ago

    by t i f f a n y ♥

    This is a beautiful poem. I can relate to it a lot. I don't have enough confidence in myself, in fact, I downright hate myself. And I most of the time, I had to admit it, but I do care what others think. But don't we all at some point? This is an excellent poem. 5/5 forsure.

    Tiffany.xox.

  • 18 years ago

    by Katlynn

    Another amazing job. I really like this one alot. I mean be who you are not someone else. that's what i tell myself and friends because it's always good to be you not someone else because you just never know who is looking. keep it up. keep on writing. love always and forever.

  • 18 years ago

    by Emma

    Great poem. Makes you feel a little better about yourself. Keep up the good work.

    Emma5/5

  • I 100% agree with this poem...not everybody'z perfect...i don't think anybody wants to be but some people really consider themselves so good and better than every one else...well the way that u wrote this is amazing and spoken like a true poet...u r very good...keep up the great work...5/5

  • What a great message!! its so true and so well written... your heaps talented well done! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by ShadowedPhoenix

    Awesome! You know i really wanted to say something different from the usual but i tried to find anythings i could give suggestions on or any tiny faults, so i read the poem a few times and guess what? I COULD'T! This poem was really really great with an amazing message, people need more poems like this! I loved it!

  • 18 years ago

    by Little Dot

    Wow, this poem has a wonderful message. You did a super job.

  • 18 years ago

    by Fallen~Tears

    Sooooo True.. i love this part in it

    "You don't have to pretend
    Or be fake, at all
    You should be someone you're proud of
    And be able to stand tall"

    I really needed to hear this poem at this point in my life.. since i get wrapped up in peer pressure.. great poem again ..

    ~!*FallenTears~!*
    ~!*Meaghen~!*

  • 18 years ago

    by PS

    Oo i love it. i needed to read something like this a couple years ago and now it still talks to me. i know a bunch of people who need to read this. i love it. nice job

  • 18 years ago

    by glass*wall*prison

    This poem is nothin last than spectacular flow was good ryhm was excellent. THe message...was awesome

    beautiful write

    5/5

    ~GLASS~