The Suicide Act

by Allison   Dec 26, 2005


I walk down a dark hallway
And look all around
I glance at the floor
Theres blood on the ground

I continue to walk
Never missing a step
I continue to think of
All the secrets they kept

I'm stumbling along know
I don't know where to go
I look at my arms
And the stories they show

I'm following the blood trail
It ends at a room
Don't want to go in there
It feels to much like doom

I take a breath now
I open the door
The sight before me
Causes the tears to pour

I don't know whats happening
That can't be me
I open my mouth
Desperately trying to scream

Theres blood on the bed
And blood on the floor
I'm on the bed
I can see from the door

I glance at my arms
How transparent they look
Then I look at the bed
The life that I took

The tears come harder
I sink to the floor
I glance at my body
Then run out the door

I never stop running
I never glance back
Forever I'm part of
The Suicide Act

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  • 16 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    Ouch. That sounds so painful in many ways. 5/5 It was still great, though.

  • 17 years ago

    by in.need.of.a.lucky.charm

    Wow. that one was awesome! i loved it. gave me shivers! keep it up !!

    much love and many kisses,
    bex

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    OMG! This is truely great! It was really breathtaking, Like i had to keep reading it to see what happens. I loved it! 5/5 And i would give it more then that..but it wont let me lol
    luv natalie x0x

  • 18 years ago

    by Summer

    You really did do a great job on this poem. I love it.

  • 18 years ago

    by Little Dot

    This poem was truely amazing. I thought you did an outstanding job in this one. It has great imagery and feeling throughout the whole poem.