Comments : Write a secret scream

  • 18 years ago

    by Katlynn

    Amazing job. I like the concept on this poem. I think a lot of people are going to get a piece of paper out after they read this and let everything out instead of doing what they normal do like cut, burn, punch etc when they are mad. i think they will use this instead. amazing job once again. Your very talented. keep it up. keep on writing. love always and forever.

  • 18 years ago

    by nobody truly knows me

    Wow, excellent. 5/5. keep up the good work.
    **lisa**

  • 18 years ago

    by Pure Silence

    This is the prefect description of what writing is, and you did it with flare well done, thankyou for the comment it is great apperechated -sp?- lol sorry I really suck at spelling, wheres my spell check when i need it X( lol, any who keep it up=)

    Much Love
    Pure

  • 18 years ago

    by Pure Silence

    This is the prefect description of what writing is, and you did it with flare well done, thankyou for the comment it is great apperechated -sp?- lol sorry I really suck at spelling, wheres my spell check when i need it X( lol, any who keep it up=)

    Much Love
    Pure

  • 18 years ago

    by Fighter (Ariane L.)

    WOOOW.... im speechless.... this is one of the best poems i've ever read. wow... you're truly talented. keep it up!
    -xXx-

  • 18 years ago

    by Felicia

    Thanks for the comment this is a great poem 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Sherry Lynn

    Writing has a way to free a soul. I may not be able to express much orally, but in writing I can say it all. Nice work.

    ---Sher

  • 18 years ago

    by SuperJenius

    You put how i feel about my poems in great wording. i tried a poem with this subject but it didnt work out. totally transcendant poem i loved it
    ~HazE

  • Nice. good job

  • 18 years ago

    by Hannah Mureen

    Hey, great job! 5/5
    thanks for the comment on my poem!
    hannah

  • 18 years ago

    by Little Dot

    Superb work on this poem.

  • 18 years ago

    by kareeenuhhh

    Im amazed! wow, amazing what a beautiful sight! loved it!!!(alot)=)

  • 18 years ago

    by NissY

    An exceptional piece of art...

    I love the flow of your poems...

    keep it up...

  • 18 years ago

    by Ria

    Yes,that'a about it. I guess everyone writing feels the same way!great poem, it manages to put through what you want to...say?Have a nice day!

  • 18 years ago

    by Dreams

    I don't know about the others, but this poem makes my eyes burned. I think you penned a situation all writers would feel everytime they start picking up their tools where emotions would start to flow.. This is an incredible write, you manage to reach out to the readers and drew them into your world of words. I'm rendered speechless. Excellent flow, excellent rhythm, excellent stuff. Thanks for sharing. =)

  • 18 years ago

    by Lexie

    An Amazing poem... That is the reason i started writing. To let my emotions out. I had never shared my work until i started posting on this site. Wonderful job.

  • 18 years ago

    by VioletRaven

    Truly inspirational, you have put into words what I could not. As I read this I felt that wish to write, to express emotion. You've really inspired me to go and write what I cannot speak.
    I like the reasurances you added that no one else has to know what you write, this is a thought I have often.
    Well done, another excellent poem,
    *VioletRaven*

  • 18 years ago

    by EJ

    Hey i really liked that.. it is like a reason why we write and i think its important for us to know that when people ask us why we do write.. your poem explains that in a way.. your a good writer and great at expressing things.. nicely done.. bye bye EJ

  • 18 years ago

    by shadowlight

    Wow. orion i am impressed, i think your poetic skills are improving (if thats possible as you were good to start with). this is a very strong poem and very truthful about why a lot of people write poetry.

    on a side note... where have you got to? i havn't heard from you in days! ring me ok?

  • 18 years ago

    by Summer

    You have a great way of putting things into words that alot of people can't. Emotions that I've thought were indescribable you've found a way to do it. Amazing.
    5/5