Comments : Nobody Sees

  • 18 years ago

    by Pure Silence

    Well put Juls, the imagery that went through this is flawless. Im proud of yeh -hugs- Loveeeed it

    Jenn

  • 18 years ago

    by Becca

    Tis a really good n descriptive poem n describes me in someways too...it was really good keep it up
    becca x

  • 18 years ago

    by Samantha Waits

    OMG! That was really good. I felt the pain for a minute there. Rachael sayz she luvs it too. Keep writing more. Luv ya buddy. See ya in the chat room lata.

  • 18 years ago

    by an endless sky

    So sad I had 2 hold back my tiars but good work

    Foxy

  • 18 years ago

    by LostSoul

    This poem is scary...sad...but it is wonderful...

    As tony the tiger would say, its greeeaaaaaattttt!

  • 18 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Ello Julie!!! Awsome poem. Remember I am always here for you.

    Love always,
    ~Joe~

  • 18 years ago

    by k i k i

    Thanks for the comment, much appreciated :)
    I love your work, keep it up
    Take care xx

  • 18 years ago

    by AlexJ

    Very good poem! So sad though... I know You feel :(

  • 18 years ago

    by ASPHYXIATED

    Wow hun.
    I know exactly how you feel.. from the shower to faking hapiness =\
    you did a good job on this!

    Love,Lisa xD

  • 18 years ago

    by Emma

    That was a great poem. i really like the last lines. i just enjoyed reading it. keep up the good work.

    Emma5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Vegetable

    This is very good, I can relate alot to this. I love how you ended it, it gives a great tone. Good job. I really like it.

  • 18 years ago

    by t. h a l l i d a y *

    That was so sad but it was a really good poem... keep it up

  • 18 years ago

    by VampyraKi†

    Wow that was amazing

  • 18 years ago

    by xDryTearsx

    Aw it was so sad
    But so good. :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Jerry Scott

    Wow, deep. draws some raw emotion.