Comments : As I Wish and Ask

  • 18 years ago

    by Gesselle Valle

    Some of you might remember this one. Illuminati and Adel, you guys were always there. I decided to put this poem in this account because no one knows about the other one, well, just you two. This poem relates so much to the feelings in my heart now ^_^ so, why not sharing it with the rest of the site? hehehehe. enjoy.

  • 18 years ago

    by Bill Turner

    Beautifully written. From the heart. What an awesome poem.

  • 18 years ago

    by Styles

    It's always a pleasure to read your poetry=). Again a great expression of your feelings through writing.

  • 18 years ago

    by Simon Hayes

    Superb. Well written, straight from your heart!

  • 18 years ago

    by Angie

    Written beautifully from the heart....

  • 18 years ago

    by Steven Beesley

    Gesselle,

    So much longing, many feelings from the hear. So beautifully transcribed.

    Warmest regards,

    Steve

  • 18 years ago

    by dora

    Wow that was really g0od. such a t0uching piece. beautifully written darl. great j0b!

    l0tz 0f l0ve -*x00o00x*-
    d0ra

  • 18 years ago

    by cLumsy

    Aw. cute. i like the rhyming questions. ;D 5/5 keep up that rare talent!

  • 18 years ago

    by Z

    Wow, all your new stuff is so pwerful, strong emotional content. I love it! Great job, keep it up!

  • 18 years ago

    by Ann Stareyes

    Truly a beautiful piece....written with so much emotion from the heart.....great job....

    Love Ann

  • 18 years ago

    by Jesika

    Okay wow you have outdone your self in this one. I love your poetry you are so great at it. Keep it up I can't wait to read more.

  • 17 years ago

    by C Cattaway

    Maybe I've found the person to speak of my love TO whom I love.. You write as if you know what I wanted to say to him.. Well done.. xx