Comments : Life's Symphony

  • 18 years ago

    by Katlynn

    I loved it. it's like a old school game child hood poem. i mean i guess if you really think about it it's all real. every game we all played or even the rhymes become something real. amazing job. i really liked this poem alot. keep it up. keep on writing. your very talented.

  • Brilliant! very unique style, refreshing. it had great flow, simple, yet powerful stanzas. the whole poem had great effect. very well done. fantastic write!

  • I Liked The Message In This Poem, And I Must Say It Was Cute! I Love The Way You Mixed In Common Riddles To Make a Masterpiece, It Was Creative...Unique,...And Fun To Read, I Don't Get To See Poetry Like Yours Very Often 5/5 xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by Lucy Loves Not

    I really enjoyed this poem...I'm not often a fan of poems that rhyme, but I liked the ideas you presented. Another good write.

    It was...[I cannot think of the right words]...pleasently abstract, in a sense.

    Lucy Loves Not

  • 18 years ago

    by Little Dot

    Wow, I really liked this poem, very different and unique.

  • 18 years ago

    by Juls

    I like that one..it has meaning while still being i cute poem

    Juls

  • 18 years ago

    by Baby B

    Very well written.. flows nicely and I like how you used nursery ryhmes... great job

  • 18 years ago

    by Nici

    I liked the different approach you gave this topic. It added to the overall effect of the piece.

    keep writing
    Nici

  • 18 years ago

    by Samantha

    Wow! i really liked this! it was so creative and the message was really strong! it flowed extremly well and was just so true to the point! keep it up! i love your poems and you will be added onto my favorites list!

    sammie