Crumbling World

by Juls   Dec 31, 2005


My world is crumbling
as I speak
i try and dont succeed
I feel so weak

I cant seek help
I dont know if I can talk
I try but I cant
What the F**k is wrong

Day after day
night after night
I lay on my bed
as I wonder whats wrong

I cant answer
that for myself
so I give that question
to you all

I cant figure
it out for myself
so I ask this question
What is wrong

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  • 18 years ago

    by *BeAuTiFuLlY*iNaDeQuEtE*

    Hey, this is brilliant!!!! wow so beautifully written, thankyou for adding me to your favourites, it means a lot
    love XxFeEBeDeExX

  • 18 years ago

    by Robert

    Great one, a lot can relate to a poem like this, esp for the fact that everyone gets confused at times.

  • 18 years ago

    by *Sherrie*

    Wow, you know what you are doing dont you, I really like this.

  • 18 years ago

    by VampyraKi†

    Very deep and well expressed

  • 18 years ago

    by Live, Laugh, Love

    That is a very deep poem but a very wonderful poem.. Your an awesome writer and keep it up

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