Comments : MidNiGht kiss(kinDa LonG)

  • 18 years ago

    by firexflys

    Nice job hun very kind sad though. i hope things get better for you in the new year and just remembe alwyas listen to you heart. 5.5

  • 18 years ago

    by Rican Chemistry

    Ok That happened B4 Yesterday...But I had to put it up...I am really sad cus I talk to him....he says we need to talk more and if he can see me tonight or something...But I know whats going on...and wow I guess I wasnt the only one feeling bad yesterday....you'll b ok. I feel bad now cus u feelin sad. I dont want u hurt. But things will get better I promise...Te quiero mucho...Well this is a really great poem...Cus I kno it came from ur heart. Keep it up ma. Amazin job!!!!!!

    ::MELI::

  • 18 years ago

    by Just Sierra

    Aw!!!! That was so cute, yet....kinda actually depressing, lol! I think that its amazing that I can write a page long story about death and whatnot and not really find that as depressing as this....lol. Prolly cuz yours is more real, but anyhow. It was a great poem and totally romantic considering the whole New Years Eve Kisses stuff. Beautiful actually! So good job, and thanks for demonstrating how a good poem is written!

    Thanks for sharing!!!

    ~Sierra

    __Meatball Hoagie#2__

  • 18 years ago

    by pseudo

    WoW.. thats a beautifully written poem =)! First off your title: Perfect at first I didnt understand it but then as I continued to read I got it and I think that is great title for this poem.. Also your poem flowed very well. I love how its based on a true experience ( i know how painful it can really for that to happen to you so I can realate to this) I loved how you described how you felt and what was happening around you! And it seems like you put your heart into this and a lot of emotion. . . awesome job =)

    --emotionless19*

  • 16 years ago

    by NEYDA

    THATS REALLY GOOD..UR TaLENTED BUT GUYS AINT WORTH IT...LIFE GOES ON WITH OR WITH OUT DEM BY UR SIDE..I VE KINDA BEEN THREW THE SAME THING BUT I MADE IT THREW. MY EX WAS WITH ME 4 2 YRS ND WE BOTH STILL KINDA LIKE EACHTOHER BUT SUFRI MUCHO WITH HIM SO IM LEARNIN HOW 2 MOVE ON...GUYS CAN B DIKS AT POINTS BUT ALWAYS KNO THAT WITH UR TRU GURLIES ULL MAKE IT THREW