I like this one it not bad nor good it great but im not a person to get stuff unless im in the mood and im not in the mood..srry but when im in the mood i will tell u about ur other kk srry u got a aim.

Wow fallen that was such a deep poem. im really sorry about your parents beating you -starts to cry- that is so emotional! it was a good poem but it wasnt if you know what i mean. the poem itself was very well written but just a really sad thing :(

keep up the good poem writing!
SEB.x

I liked it. I thought that it was very sad, but it was still really good. Keep up the good work.

Its a good poems it shows the fear and anger behind your mask you wear in the real world i like and thank for the comment on my poem

Mike

I love it, it flows very well

Aww hun I'm so sorry this has happened to you.. I hope everything has stopped now.. This is a really sad poem and I'm sorry that bastard did this to you...
!^I Love Being In Love^!

Sad, but in a good way.

No-one should ever be made to go through what you went through.
i really liked your poem, you've managed to express your feelings in a healthy way. if you ever need to talk im here.....luv em

This one is really sad and it happened to a really good friend of mine. i really love this one. kepp up the good work.

This one is rly sad and i luv it...i luv sad poems *lol* but seriously this is a great poem. 5/5

Wow that was really deep and thoughtful poem its so sad and touching i feel so sorry for anyone who has to go through that i hope its over for you and that wrtting helps you heal

but your writting is beautiful well done on a fantastic poem

lots of love
xxALLYxx

Wow-that is breath taking---It is very sad and in the poem you express your emotions well. This must be a hard topic to write about- The flow is great-5/5 Stay strong-I hope life gets better for you--

It's rather sad. It makes me think of all those children going through this. And it feels like it's straight from the child - like you are dictating the child's thoughts word for word.

I'm a little confused whether you was trying to rhyme or not. I figured not, but every now and then they'll be a rhyming couplet, which puzzled me.

It is good though. Nice work. x

Beautiful!