Comments : The Broken Man

  • 11 years ago

    by Void

    Well, I have unfortunately been cheated on, but he told me - he didn't lie. So I'm still with him and I'm still happy to be with him. It was a long time ago it happened, but reading this poem seemed to bring back all the hurt I had once felt. Which shows that your writing showed alot of feeling, emotion and even a great flow for the rhyming. It was really well done.

  • 11 years ago

    by melinda

    This poem is very good. your talented! 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Cuddles

    Personally, I have never known sadness of this kind, but I love the poemIt sounds as if there's maybe a little anger or resentment at the fact that the person cheated. Never happened to me, but I understand. The sadness of it is hitting me in waves. Excellent job, though.

  • 11 years ago

    by LyricalFlow

    Iv been cheated on and it hurts especially when you love the person, this poem was really good, the details and the way u explained the emotions were brilliant 5/5 scratch that i give it 10/5

  • 11 years ago

    by *Amber Faith.* ©

    Your very talented. Keep it up. I give it a 5/5.

  • 11 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    Good dedication. It's nice to kno i am not the only one whose been lied and cheated on. Love never lies! So if they lie they're not love! Latas/ i rly enjoyed this poem.

    LISSA

  • 11 years ago

    by FoundHim

    I havent been cheated on but i have been lied to and the feeling that results is not great...i love this one and cant wait to read the next one... i always comment on your poems because i want you to kno that i really love your poems and i comment on almost every poem i read... great job and keep it up
    ~Sandra~

  • 11 years ago

    by BeautifulDisaster

    This is another fantastic poem hun, you're very talented, and a BOY ha, wow sorry i'm not sexist but I dont really expect boys to have feelings or write beautiful poetry, ialways thought you were cruel but you proved me wrong heh, ohh and you're a drummer howw lovveeely we shud form a band mwahahaha my friend wants to form a band so she can cuuff the hot drummers and bassists but okay too much info kthx. prettypoeeeeem

  • 10 years ago

    by X Kashies Misery X

    That was really good, I felt the amount of emotion and pain you put into this poem, it made me anxious to read it all....that's a great thing to interest and lock your reader into you poem, it was so intense, I seriously loved it. Although some lines need question marks, and some words have a little grammar errors, you should fix them up because they tend to have a big effect. But yeah, amazing.....

  • Beautiful work...keep it up so i can read more from you...