F.Y.I i had dreams but like my hope it crashed & burned.

by Puerto_Rican_Chick   Jan 3, 2006


I think of you and tears start to fall.
i feel so low as your name i start to call.

i feel so dead cause without you i am.
lifeless i lay cause i can no longer stand.

im empty and i dont know how to fill the void...
how can i rebuild all the things that i've destroyed.

i see everything around me fall to the ground,
i scream for help but i make no sound.

the light to freedom, it dimly glows;
but i think im to late cause my blood no longer flows.

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  • 18 years ago

    by The Poetic Child

    Short but strong....excellent job 5/5
    thanks for your comment but me and my gf didnt break up..more then half of my poetry isnt really true, i was just in a sad mood so i wrote a sad poem...Me and my gf are too much in love to break up lol...thanx though for lookin out for me
    ttyl sometime
    PeAcE
    ~The Poet~

  • 18 years ago

    by ARGANGEL

    I love this poem..i can greatly relate to it..love always
    claudia
    p.s. KEEP IT Up