Comments : With you beloved...

  • 18 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Just too sweet...may GOD make ur wish come true this year/month/day/moment.....
    *puff* look around u..the guy behind u is the one... :o)) kidding..

    lovely poem dear...really soothing!!

    asusual...5/5 as u deserve nothing less then that...take care and all the best

  • 18 years ago

    by Truly in Love

    Hey,

    that was so cute... start of a new love...
    nicely done... keep up the good work
    Definetly a 5

    Much Love,
    Ipsita

  • 18 years ago

    by Torn

    Very sweet poem...
    loving it!!
    >torn -x.x.x-

  • 18 years ago

    by chavii

    Such a sweet tender poem dear !

    Best regards
    chavii

  • 18 years ago

    by TinyDancer46

    Ohh, what a beautiful poem! It's so sweet and romantic... you did a great job at writing this, so keep up the amazing work.

  • 18 years ago

    by ~â‚£ading |nspiration~

    It's cool, shows how much u really luv this guy, well, it's a wonderful poem describing a wonderful life...

  • 18 years ago

    by Spam

    Awww this is so sweet!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Emily

    I really like it only if i was as good as that.. was this poem based o real life. if so i know what u mean by it. well awsome poem i give u a ten..

  • 18 years ago

    by Trish-Rish

    Very Sweet..! i luv it

  • 18 years ago

    by sarah

    Wat a really nice piece of wrk def 5 vote keep writing and take care hun sarah x